Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think better
Everything of life is like a coin and it has pros and cons. We should not jump to a conclusion without evaluating it properly. From my perspective, it seems to be a debatable statement that young adults should isolate from their family or not. I would strongly agree to live young adults with their families for a long time for the following reasons.
First of all, Parents are the most important person in every member of a family. Parents did their best to make the children happy. They have sacrificed a lot. Then is it really a good idea to live without them? I think no, Our parents do a lot of activities to educate us. For example, I am from a middle-class family. My father is the only earning member of my family. At the beginning of my study, is it okay for him to bear my educational expenses? But, the expenses of my educations are increasing day by day and my parents felt tensed because they had not enough money to bear it. They had maintained our family and there were no additional income sources. In that case, they sacrificed their happiness for me. I figured it out during my Higher secondary examination. I realized that there was not enough money to register for the examination. Then I went to my parents and told about it. I saw sadness in their face. Then my father told me not to worry. He will manage it. I noticed that my father worked very hard all day long of another land, my mother sold his favorite pieces of jewelry for my registration fees. Because of my education, they lost everything. Now I am an engineer. I am able to earn money. Is it okay to leave them at this time? Is it really considerable to leave them at a good time? I think no.
In addition, when the children become old the parents become older. They are getting old day by day. In that case, there are many health problems arisen in their body. They feel uncomfortable because of little sickness. In that case, they need proper treatment to recover their sickness. The young persons of any family are responsible for this. They should take care of them otherwise they will get hurt. For example, one of my friend who is in a company to do his job. He lives in a town, on the other hand, his parents live in a village. Once I heard sad news from my friend. He told me that once my father was in a sickness. But there was nobody to help him. I was also busy with my job and was not able to spend time with them. I figured out that if my father was in my room in the town. Definitely, he would recover soon from illness. Now, because of my lack of responsibility, he is no more.
Moreover, there is a good advantage if the parents live with their children. When children become young, parents age also increased. In that case, they always feel lonely. If their children with them, they can share their feelings and reduce their loneliness. It increases the intimacy between children and parents. The parents feel better when they live with their young children.
Finally, I would like to conclude that it's really difficult to figure out a lucid explanation virtually instead of practically. On my view, according to the above points. it needless to say that young adults should stay with their parents for a long time. As I am a young adult and I definitely prefer to stay with my families for a longer time because of their sacrifices, social responsibility. I think it's better to stay with my family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, for example, i think, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 120.0 43.0788530466 279% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2790.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 625.0 407.700716846 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.464 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54923536771 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4448 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 893.7 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 36.0 9.59856630824 375% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 55.0 20.6003584229 267% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0366311822 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.7272727273 100.406767564 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3636363636 20.6045352989 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.41818181818 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.88709677419 409% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289257011913 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667490400628 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923020950451 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221144292177 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895198444968 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 11.7677419355 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.4 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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