Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
As everything of life is like a coin and it has pros and cons. People have to evaluate carefully before jumping to
the conclusions. From my perspective, young people enjoy life more tha older one for folloing reasons.
First of all, Its true that young people are full of energy, they can do everything what they want. They enjoy with
various type of activities. For example, According to the biography of Bangladeshi National poet, Kazi Nazrul Islam, He
was very energetic in his young age. He always do something that is not appropriate to the society. But, He enjoyed it
to do that. There was no shamness what people were actually thinking about himself. But, from the older age history, we can figure out that he was very polite and introvert. He did anything that is related to society and responsible. Becaus ehe had a lot of responsibility and accountibility to the society. If he did any wrong that people will not respect him. Thats why older aged people think a lot to do enjoy or to participate any entertainment activities.
In addition, Younger aged people have no fear about their life. They are not addicted to pious activities. Theyy do not say their prayer regularly but they play foortball, cricket , participate concert, watch cinema from large cinema hall, make a party in thier room. On the other hand old aged people are addicted to pious activities. They are more fear about life. They say their prayer regularly. they go to mosque. temple , cruch to say their prayer. Thety do not involve any kind of entertainment acticvities.
Moreover, Due to the health condition young people can do anything. They cam do strong activities, participate strong game to enjoy themselves on the contrary old aged people can not do it. For instance. There was a swimming copetition in the village river of my area. It was a mithy river and too long. All the young people of my village decided to participate this competition but there was no old aged competitior. They were audiences and standing on the bank of that river. Then at the prize giving ceremony, the chairman told some words that was proven that old aged people can not enjoy life. The chairman told that, " Hello people, its really a wonderful competition. I am nostalgic. When i was a young man, I did that and i was one f the best player in this village. Buut, due to busy schedule, health condition and lot of pressure, I am not able to do that. I really miss those days to enjoy with my friends."
Furthermore,Young people are full of confidence. They have no fear of life. Thats why they can enjoy their life. Once one of my friend did a mountain tour with his friends. He enjoyed a lot but his parents were not able to do that. They were on the apartment and enjoy the local scenary. They were not able to climb the mountain becaus eof lack of energy. H efigured out that it was just wasted his money because his parents were unable to enjoy the sceneray of mountain.
Finally, I know its really impossible to make a conclusion with a virtual way. But, from the above points, we can strongle with the statement that because of responsibility, physical structure of body, health condition, young people enjoy more than old people. Old people are not able to do that because of time management and health condition. Thats why i would like to conclude that old people enjoy less than young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2809.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 596.0 407.700716846 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71308724832 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94096258147 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66858039974 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444630872483 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 880.2 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 46.0 20.6003584229 223% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6374277442 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0652173913 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9565217391 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76086956522 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430931343417 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095048029048 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983663485221 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199708293433 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104733617665 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.15 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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