someone should come out to get something while others think waiting can give them success.
God help those who help themselves,yes these are the golden words in my life.We will get if struggle otherwise if we just think that we will get just by sitting at one place than its wrong.I will explain it by giving few reasons to support my answers with following reasons.
Firstly, if someone wants to get good result in any test,that person has to struggles to get good marks,for example one of my friend wanted to pass his GRE test, to get admission in a university,so he just bought a book and started doing his practice,i gave him an advice that go and find a good tutor for you as this test is not a piece of cake,you have to go out of way to get it pass with appropriate marks,but he didnt listen to me, and he decide to do it by himself and the result was not so satisfying .
So in this sense it believe that if he had done something extraordinary to pass that test he would have done it in his first attempt but he didnt struggle for it and just took it very easy.
Furthermore,if a person wants to achieve a desired goal he or she has to work hard for it,for example i know one of my teacher who taught me very well for my english test,and when i asked her that from where she learned so good techniques she told me that she went out of her way in every learning,for instance she did her masters in english language by getting scholarship from united states.She was a good student but than she learned that its not enough she has to work hard for it and to achieve good position in society she has to learn hard and should go out of country and get good results.
In conclusion I am completely agree with the statement and will follow it in my further future decisions also, to make life easy and successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
God help those who help themselves,yes these are...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (God) must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
God help those who help themselves,yes these are...
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Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , yes
God help those who help themselves,yes these are the golden words in my life.W...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...s these are the golden words in my life.We will get if struggle otherwise if we ju...
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Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... life.We will get if struggle otherwise if we just think that we will get just by ...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... by sitting at one place than its wrong.I will explain it by giving few reasons t...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...one wants to get good result in any test,that person has to struggles to get good mar...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...erson has to struggles to get good marks,for example one of my friend wanted to pass...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...E test, to get admission in a university,so he just bought a book and started doin...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sion in a university,so he just bought a book and started doing his practice,i ga...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...t a book and started doing his practice,i gave him an advice that go and find a g...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... a book and started doing his practice,i gave him an advice that go and find a g...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
... you as this test is not a piece of cake,you have to go out of way to get it pass wi...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...ay to get it pass with appropriate marks,but he didnt listen to me, and he decide to...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...t it pass with appropriate marks,but he didnt listen to me, and he decide to do it by...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...marks,but he didnt listen to me, and he decide to do it by himself and the result was ...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...elf and the result was not so satisfying . So in this sense it believe that if he...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believes'?
Suggestion: believes
...ot so satisfying . So in this sense it believe that if he had done something extraordi...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ave done it in his first attempt but he didnt struggle for it and just took it very e...
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Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...d just took it very easy. Furthermore,if a person wants to achieve a desired goa...
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Line 6, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...d goal he or she has to work hard for it,for example i know one of my teacher who ta...
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Line 6, column 103, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...she has to work hard for it,for example i know one of my teacher who taught me ve...
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Line 6, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... taught me very well for my english test,and when i asked her that from where she le...
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Line 6, column 181, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... very well for my english test,and when i asked her that from where she learned s...
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Line 6, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...he went out of her way in every learning,for instance she did her masters in english...
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Line 6, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
... getting scholarship from united states.She was a good student but than she learned...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t good results. In conclusion I am completely agree with the statement and ...
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Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s. In conclusion I am completely agree with the statement and will follow it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29573170732 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48080928041 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.1344086022 323% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 178.933507203 48.9658058833 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.8 100.406767564 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.6 20.6045352989 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 5.45110844103 371% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096479861794 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464572987805 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311872840788 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464572987805 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311872840788 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 11.7677419355 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 58.1214874552 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.55 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.0537634409 279% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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