someone should come out to get something while others think waiting can give them success.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
God help those who help themselves,yes these are...
^^^^
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (God) must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
God help those who help themselves,yes these are...
^^^^
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , yes
God help those who help themselves,yes these are the golden words in my life.W...
^^^^
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...s these are the golden words in my life.We will get if struggle otherwise if we ju...
^^
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... life.We will get if struggle otherwise if we just think that we will get just by ...
^^
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... by sitting at one place than its wrong.I will explain it by giving few reasons t...
^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...one wants to get good result in any test,that person has to struggles to get good mar...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...erson has to struggles to get good marks,for example one of my friend wanted to pass...
^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...E test, to get admission in a university,so he just bought a book and started doin...
^^^
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sion in a university,so he just bought a book and started doing his practice,i ga...
^^
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...t a book and started doing his practice,i gave him an advice that go and find a g...
^^
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... a book and started doing his practice,i gave him an advice that go and find a g...
^
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
... you as this test is not a piece of cake,you have to go out of way to get it pass wi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...ay to get it pass with appropriate marks,but he didnt listen to me, and he decide to...
^^^^
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...t it pass with appropriate marks,but he didnt listen to me, and he decide to do it by...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...marks,but he didnt listen to me, and he decide to do it by himself and the result was ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...elf and the result was not so satisfying . So in this sense it believe that if he...
^^
Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believes'?
Suggestion: believes
...ot so satisfying . So in this sense it believe that if he had done something extraordi...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ave done it in his first attempt but he didnt struggle for it and just took it very e...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...d just took it very easy. Furthermore,if a person wants to achieve a desired goa...
^^^
Line 6, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...d goal he or she has to work hard for it,for example i know one of my teacher who ta...
^^^^
Line 6, column 103, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...she has to work hard for it,for example i know one of my teacher who taught me ve...
^
Line 6, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... taught me very well for my english test,and when i asked her that from where she le...
^^^^
Line 6, column 181, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... very well for my english test,and when i asked her that from where she learned s...
^
Line 6, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...he went out of her way in every learning,for instance she did her masters in english...
^^^^
Line 6, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
... getting scholarship from united states.She was a good student but than she learned...
^^^
Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t good results. In conclusion I am completely agree with the statement and ...
^^
Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s. In conclusion I am completely agree with the statement and will follow it i...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29573170732 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48080928041 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.1344086022 323% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 178.933507203 48.9658058833 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.8 100.406767564 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.6 20.6045352989 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 5.45110844103 371% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096479861794 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464572987805 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311872840788 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464572987805 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311872840788 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 11.7677419355 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 58.1214874552 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.55 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.0537634409 279% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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