Recently, some filmmakers have been influenced by painters and writers and represent their ideas through charming movies. There is an unanswered question among book lovers whether they read books before watching the relevant films or vice versa. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to allocate my time to read the story in a book in advance and then watching a movie inspired by it. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through two compelling reasons.
The first exquisite point corroborating my stance on this subject is that given that the actual creators of stories are writers and filmmakers only show their own interpretation of books, it is better to read books first. Sometimes the author of a story or novel had been dead some centuries ago, or they live in some remote areas. So, the film producers do not access them to ask for some details or misunderstandings. Furthermore, some directors intentionally change some parts of stories or points based on their thought to attract or surprise their audiences. For instance, the directors of the TV series Game of Thrones modified actual events of the novel in some seasons deliberately to either maintain some characters or remove them. Therefore, if people watch the movie earlier, they will not specify the modification of the films.
Another reason to be mentioned is that if someone sees a film that does not develop a book well, they will not read that book; however, the book is impressive and valuable. There are some reasons for these unsuccessful movies that the film producers spent exorbitant expenses for them. All narratives are not suited for making a bestselling product of the film industry because the translation from a reading medium to a visual medium takes people the opportunity to imagine the characters in mind. The filmmaker would not be ingenious like the writer and cannot choose the right actors and employ creative techniques. As a result, the films do not entertain viewers as well as the books do.
Reflecting upon all motives mentioned above, one soon realizes why we should read books before looking at the visual forms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9943977591 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7823573263 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577030812325 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5850033065 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4375 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382493936874 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109130518533 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086726525984 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213975383182 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689071060614 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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