“Sometimes it is better to be dishonest.” Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
In today's sophisticated and progressive world, the importance of truth is not covered to anyone. Honesty is one of the momentous factors for communication among people. In this vein, some individuals believe that there are some circumstances that people are allowed to be dishonest while others hold the view that people mast tell the truth anytime. I totally support the idea of the latter group and the reasons clarifying my point of view are elaborated upon hereunder.
First of all, being dishonest may cause to loose friends or hurt their emotions. To be more specific, humans do not like untruth naturally and it is unpleasant for them to have relationship with people who are not honest. For example, from my own experience, when I was a university student, I had a close friend that we were spending a lot of time together. One day, when he requested a book from me, I told a lie to him, which I had lost the book. I said this because I needed the book that time. Thus when my friend found out that I had told untruth to him, he got upset and our pleasant relationship stopped because of my dishonesty. As can be seen, saying untruth can have bad affects on friends' relationships.
In addition, since children learn anything from their surrounding, being dishonest may have undesired effects on them. It is common knowledge that children are not capable of distinguishing the well behavior related to different circumstances. Therefore, when we tell a lie and justify our action, children will imitate this behavior and they will learn to be dishonest unintentionally. For instance, recent scientific research conducted by the University of Alberta researchers has shown that the majority of the children who being dishonest is their common behavior are grown up in the environment that their family did not tell the truth every time. As it is illustrated from this research, being dishonest even if in few circumstances can affect the behavior of the children.
In conclusion, not only do the not being honest can cause to loose our friends but also it can have bad effects on our children who learn anything from older family members. As a result, honesty is a momentous factor to have strong relationships and better future with honest people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91122715405 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88349729444 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506527415144 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8897911748 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102253211161 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341143885485 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312820925964 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619873170947 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020637759835 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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