Students aged 13- 18 are taught dfferent subjects by difrent teachers while
younger students are taught by only one teacher all day long. Some people suggest it would benefit young students to be taught by different teachers. Do you agree with this view? Why or why not?
Schooling methods are widely investigated and discussed in modern society including those pre-schools. Thus some people hold that students under the age of 13 also should be taught by different teachers just as the older students, which i can't deny.
First, teachers who specialize in one filed are more professional, that is, they know how to make the teaching schedule for students with different ages and varies educational levels, in this case, students can receive better education. For example, my little brother who studies in a private pre-school with different teachers responsible for different subjects. Their teachers will prepare a whole semester schedule for students and parents which inform them what they should do in different phases and render their parents to know the actual situations of their children. By this way, my brother generally have a clear goal about his whole semester, and when he encounter difficult in his studies, the teachers will reshape the schedule personally according to my brother' situations. From the feedback of my brother, I notice that he can almost command the all knowledge that teacher impart, which is more effective than those public schools with only one teacher.
Second, having different teachers charge for different subjects will largely lower the teachers' burden, and making them more passionate. To illustrate, teachers who are suppose to educate all kinds of subjects need to prepare all subjects about what they will impart to students before the second day. So if they want to perform well, they can't avoid to accomplish it late night as they generally get home at 7 p.m..However, they are suppose to get up early, which, for a long time, will worsen their physical conditions. So in order to keep a good shape, most of teachers won't pay too much energy to prepare their class, which in turn, making students receive worsen teaching.
Finally, some may argue that younger students generally receive low-level education, so it is just a mean of wasting money for hiring more teacher. And it is undeniable. However, this view is not suit for the development of the society. Nowadays students are required higher- lever education day by day, just compare what your had learned to today's students during that ages , you can see it clearly.
In conclusion, schools are supposed to hire more teachers for students under the age of 13, it is a trend for the ever-growing society and for the sake of improving education level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13235294118 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63392939638 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0164393045 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312572170716 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106419965694 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777556006488 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17918607626 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425630068342 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.