Students, not teachers or administrations, should be in control of their own education. Use examples and reasons to support your position.
The topic at hand is wheather or not students should be in control of the education they recieve. This theme is truely important nowadys because it touches the way of effectiive learning. In my view, students sholudn' t control the education that they obtain. I believe that because teachers and other are better at their jobs than the students are.
The reason I prefer that educators need to supervise students is that often learners cant effectively manage their education. Students in that age are often immature and rarely are responsible for things such as knowledge, they aquire. As example we can see first and second grade students, they are kids and obviously prefer playing rather than learning. Since the students like them are learning, I believe that students souldn' t be in charge of their education.
Secondly, education givers better understand what you need to learn. Some students often dont know what they want. And often confront requirements. Thus, not being in charge of the knowledge they recive, is better for them. It is clear that students that are not controlling their education cumulate more knowledge.
And lastly, I believe that it is best for students not to be in control of their own education because students tend to make spontanous desidions about their future education plans. For example, by controlling his education student can make a false and uncertain choise about future job or career. Education givers can develop their skills and as consequence- preferable job much better, by teaching mandatory subjects for example. So supervising learners is always better for learning
As my essay has demonstrated the choice for education givers be in control of the student education is better option. Educatiours are better at their job than students.
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... in charge of the knowledge they recive, is better for them. It is clear that stu...
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...develop their skills and as consequence- preferable job much better, by teaching ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19587628866 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66952587002 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508591065292 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0771632972 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165517414596 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611908256899 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496400584566 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10666873409 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268942338971 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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