Students in a university club want to help others, but they can only choose one project a year, which one of the following is the best?
1. Help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics;
2. Help people who cannot afford to build or rent a home to build a house;
3. Visit and assist elderly people with daily tasks.
In some countries student from a community have participated in charity work once a year and it can be beneficial for some people who need to be supported by ones. In my idea help to elderly people is a holy activity in society. This fact has two advantages for student from social and economic aspects. This essay attends to examine the positive side of this act from two visions.
from my point of view, helping to elderly people has own social advantage which exert positive impact on the people. a way of explanation, it is important to know about social level of this kind of people and this act can increase the consideration of people to elderly people in the society. Particularly, some cases available in the developing country which ignore by own family, it should be a big pain from psychologist perspective. However, the role of student can be defined as angel who help to older people for daily activities. Besides, life expectancy has been growth between elderly individuals. For instance, some research carries out that, a vast range of death in the united states has been reduced by this sort of social activities. As result, in my idea, it is important to be considered by people that should attend to this charity.
The second reason comes to my mind is that, the most budget of government never has been invested for supporting elderly people by developed countries. This policy should be changed by social movement and some advertisement with student in the university that it is important to support them. The only way to help this kind of problem is that, the student could be voluntary for helping elderly people. in the Asia, for instance, a few countries provide some information about some people. Especially, someone who is in 70s and student can corporate with university to solve some financial problem for elderly people. Although, it needs more time to be a trend, and all university should collaborate to this work. To sum up, I believe that, not only social level of this people should be observed, but also there is important fact to support them in order to solve finical issues.
Additionally, there are two activities can count as vital program which are helping to the poor people with economic and knowledgeable aspect. The effect of this help would be valuable for people, and finally they behave as same as student in university. Nonetheless, it is crucial to focus the elderly people and support them for every day which can enhance their problem in the personal life.
In conclusion, I follow some social activities which student attend to help elderly people. it is necessary to say that. It will be done by student who are trying to solve social and economic problems of the elderly people which is ignored by government and some individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2325.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87421383648 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68985409618 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433962264151 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 750.6 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8205105885 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208051758431 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788192005479 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689027186528 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156926247686 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303767394992 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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