Students of a university have a long break between university semesters; the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:
1-students must take a course on the subjects that has no direct connection to their majors of study ( for example, a student majoring in engineering may take course in fine arts or social science)
2- Students must volunteer to work in the university’s city or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town( for example, student may help local primary school children with their homework
Which one do you think in more beneficial for students in their university? Why?
Taking a vacation and its quality is an important issue for all students and so there exist some different companies which help them in order to have better moments. In my opinion, getting volunteer work during this period can be a reasonable choice. I feel this way for a couple of reasons, which I explore in the following essay. First of all, it would a really privileged experience for them to deal with some kinds of social stuff. Although spending full time in academic space is a unique opportunity, getting distance from society can be its pest. we should strengthen our skills in various aspects on condition that we want to have a fantastic life. Therefore, these opportunities can recall us some other simple but crucial life scribes. Moreover, it can be considered as a realistic position for us which evaluate our skills and push us into a desirable future. my own experience is a compelling example of this matter. I remember, I decided to help children to do their homework as a volunteer during my student period. I am inclined to declare that I was teaching them when I was learning, simultaneously. Then, after years when I thought about those days, I recognize that my gained experiences not only lead me to become a teacher but also help me to be a successful person in my life. Secondly, after some boring and stressful days of university, it is really essential to go outside and try a new atmosphere. there are lots of materials to do during the semester and it does not allow students to think about other parts of life. A pile of homework, projects and final exams are only the parts of required stuff during education. Thus, working outside campus is considered a refreshing factor for students. For instance, my brother was working in a charity during the summer and he was familiar with some famous persons. it was a good situation for him to meet his favorite soccer player, David Bekham who has joined this charity to help them. Hence, he could have a good relaxation and prepare himself for the next semester. To sum up, I prefer to choose a volunteer job out of campus between semesters. it not only does give us a possibility to be in a new situation and get ready for our descent job but also helps us to have a good relaxation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62935323383 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71249808301 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5713902308 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.619047619 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126346106473 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038395050904 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424846828795 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126346106473 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.