Students sometimes need to take break during their school year. The needed duration of the break is different according to each students. I think that students should have a long break between their school years and have two reasons about it.
First, some years school could be hard and the pressure on students increase so much relatively. After that kind of time short break is not enough for students to refresh themselves and long break is necessary to prepare next year. For example, my third year at my university was so much hard. That year we had to take more credit than other years and make a project for our each classes. The pressure was so much on me and my classmate’s so that some of my friends left thier some classes. After that year I needed one month for only relaxation and next one month I spend my time to prepare next year because next year was my last year at the university and I had to make a thesis study. If I did not have the long break between my third and last year, I would totaly failled at my last year. Long break is exactly necessary to relax for students.
Second, school times are best to travel and see different country. Also, the ages are best to do some activities which contain so much adrenaline because after school people do not find enough time to do these. Travelling different countries and doing activities such as camping at forest for long period is required long time. For example, after my second year at the university I and my close friend whose name is Nick went to some Europe countries. Those times were best in my life because we were young and made some crazy things. Also, we climbed a mountain and it was the most amazing thing I have ever done. The Europe tour took almost one month and It is merely possible with long school break. Long breaks is necessary because those provide best moments and also good motivation.
In conclusion, long breaks give students time to relax and also to do some activities which they do not have enough time and courage to do it at rest of their time. Because of these reasons Long breaks are more good and so ı prefer to have long breaks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 742, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
... Long breaks is necessary because those provide best moments and also good motivation. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49360613811 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27713421474 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434782608696 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9092766521 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268077462927 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964219526836 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712802890218 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19745609709 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508665099497 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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