Students at a university often have o choice of places to live.Some students choose to live in university dormitories.Others choose to live in apartments in the community .Where ould you prefer to live ?Give reasons and specific details to support your pr

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Students at a university often have o choice of places to live.Some students choose to live in university dormitories.Others choose to live in apartments in the community .Where ould you prefer to live ?Give reasons and specific details to support your preference.

<font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Eğitimin öneminin son yirmi yıldan bu yana arttığı oldukça açık.</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
iyi bir eğitim almak için öğrenciler ailelerinden uzak yaşamak zorunda kalıyorlar. Bazı öğrenciler</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
üniversitelerde yurtta yaşamayı tercih ederken, diğerleri toplumdaki bölümlerde yaşamayı tercih ediyor. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">althoug</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
iki tarafın da birkaç artıları var. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Topluluğun teklif ettiği bölümlerde yaşayan görüşlerdenim</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
göz ardı edilmemesi gereken sayısız tesis ve eğitim avantajları. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Ayrıntıları açıklayacağım</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
aşağıdaki paragraflarda bazı ayrıntılı detay ve örnekler ile desteğimin.</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
Birincisi, apartman dairesinde bulunacak birçok tesis olduğu tartışılmaz bir gerçektir. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Örneğin</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
, Daire içinde yaşayan öğrenciler çalışma için iyi bir çevreye sahiptirler. Arkadaşlarını davet edebilirler ve</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
akşam yemeği yemek. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">İstedikleri zaman eve geri dönebilirler. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Üstelik sahip olma şansları var</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
kendi odalarıyla, apartman dairelerinde yaşayarak vaktinizi isteğinize göre yönetebilirsiniz.</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
Ayrıca, onlar için eğiticidir. Onlara yalnız yaşamayı öğretir, yaşam için hazırlar.</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
yemek pişirmek, alışveriş yapmak ve faturaları ödemek gibi sorumluluk sahibidir. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Bu şeyler seni yapar</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
gerçek hayata hazır. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Bu yüzden apartman dairesinde yurt dışında yaşamayı tercih ederim.</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
Öte yandan, bazı öğrenciler yurtta kalmayı tercih etmektedir.</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
diğer ülkelerden de arkadaşlar. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Öğrenciler yalnız kalmak için zaman bulamazlar. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Ne zaman hissederlerse</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
tek başlarına kendilerini konuşacak birisinin olduğundan eminim. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Ancak yurtlar çok</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
kalabalık. Öğrenciler rahat edemezler.Ayrıca, bazı yerlerde yurtta kalmaları gerekir.</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
saatler. Bu nedenle, apartman dairelerinde yaşamak yurtta kalmaktan daha iyidir.</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
Her ne kadar üniversitelerde konut ve apartman avantajları var. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Bir dairede yaşamaya razı oldum</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
Kendimi daha rahat hissettiğim yerde. </font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">Çünkü kendi odamdaki derslere dikkat edebilirim ve</font></font><font></font><font style="vertical-align: inherit;"><font style="vertical-align: inherit;">
kendimi hazırlamak</font></font>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e='vertical-align: inherit;'> , Daire içinde yaşayan öğrenciler çalışma...
^^
Line 17, column 39, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ayrıca
... kalabalık. Öğrenciler rahat edemezler.Ayrıca, bazı yerlerde yurtta kalmaları gerekir...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 52.1666666667 12% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5012.0 1977.66487455 253% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 14.784660767 4.8611393121 304% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.6458790377 2.67179642975 398% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554572271386 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 1292.4 618.680645161 209% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.8 1.51630824373 251% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 111.336479351 48.9658058833 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.789473684 100.406767564 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 5.45110844103 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.53405017921 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.88709677419 389% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 57.1 11.7677419355 485% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -131.9 58.1214874552 -227% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 6.10430107527 316% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.9 10.1575268817 353% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 68.15 10.9000537634 625% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.84 8.01818996416 148% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 86.8835125448 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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