Without a shadow of a doubt, there are some vital factors or considerations everyone must take into account regarding success in the future career. Due to its paramount importance, several aspects should be taken into account since it is crucial in people's lives. Some people may hold the view that the ability to communicate with other people is more important that merely be a hard-working student. However, others may look at this concept through a different lens. From my vantage point, if you can not utilize your job abilities confronting issues, they will not be efficient enough. In subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which aptly elucidate my viewpoint.
The first reason coming to mind in order to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with the human being's nature. The people instinctively tend to be in society and be in touch with the other creations. In fact, there is a particular connection between all the things that people accomplish. Therefore, due to this inherent potential, we should not just rely on what we have educated in the school for accomplishment in our future jobs. Out of my own experience, while I was educating in university, some proper opportunities and infrastructure had been provided for me about my current position as long as I had a suitable relationship with the professors and also the older students.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that the approach of employing knowledge and skills is essential than merely hard studying in the school in order to provide prosperity in the future career. By considering this fact, the theory subjects individually will not respond to professional tasks. As a result, not only we should have appropriate educations about theoretical issues, but also the way of usage ought to be enhanced via communicating with humans.
To put it briefly, according to the grounds mentioned above, one of the significant factor in job success and satisfaction, is abilities to be in touch with the other people in reasonable avenues because it gives rise to attain more abilities among the other people. Consequently, it is highly recommended that humans should try to improve their communication skills by presenting in society and exert their knowledge.
- Independent Writing The government wants to fund one of the following areas to improve children's education. Which one do you think is better? Why? -hire more teachers to teach in a small class - make preschool education before kindergarten mandatory - pr 76
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 83
- TPO-25 - Integrated Writing Task 80
- Independent Writing The government wants to fund one of the following areas to improve children's education. Which one do you think is better? Why? -hire more teachers to teach in a small class - make preschool education before kindergarten mandatory - pr 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
... standpoint is concerned with the human beings nature. The people instinctively tend t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17297297297 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01199937722 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591891891892 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8167401439 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196678627935 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569422288078 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589049076117 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115771454873 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281845927429 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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