Mastering in a career or in college is the goal for every person who has is ambitious. A plethora of people might incline toward the notion that having excellent knowledge of a job or a field to study is the most important, however, I personally rely on the idea that the ability to adapt or adjust to the changing condition is the most critical characteristic which who wants to be successful should have. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reason.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is that the person who does not have the ability to adapt to the situation even though he/she has a extant range of knowledge could not be able to apply his/her comprehension in the right way. For instance, we always witness brilliant students who fail to show their acquaintance when they go to college who mostly are far from their hometown, just because of the inability to adapt to the changing situation.
Furthermore, another reason which has an inviolable right to be mentioned is, seldom have I seen people who could not have adjusted to their area have enough passion to work or study well. Although a person is the most sophisticated one in his major when he/she has not enthusiastic to show his/her capability, it does not has any difference with the one without knowledge. I have the intention to use one of my personal memory as an example. I had a coworker whom had a knowledge in his field in such an extant which always others who has a problem they ask him. He usually helps them with enthusiasm. But when he changed his work in case to earn more money, he failed to get passionate enough to adapt to the new work area and this matter caused that he got fire in a month.
The last reason which I persist in my opinion is the fact that a good team spirit is a crucial part of work or study. Can not he adapt to the situation he can not grow this spirit. As much as we get to benefit from teamwork we could be more successful in the task. Without adjusting to the situation it would be impossible to conduct a beneficial healthy relationship with others which has mutual profits.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, one can deduce that having an ability to adapt to a changing condition is far more important than having excellent knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
...g reason. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is that the person who do...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to the situation even though he/she has a extant range of knowledge could not be ...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity to adapt to the changing situation. Furthermore, another reason which has an...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...to show his/her capability, it does not has any difference with the one without kno...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...to show his/her capability, it does not has any difference with the one without kno...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
...s an example. I had a coworker whom had a knowledge in his field in such an extant which al...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'adapts'.
Suggestion: adapts
...ucial part of work or study. Can not he adapt to the situation he can not grow this s...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... situation he can not grow this spirit. As much as we get to benefit from teamwork...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ortant than having excellent knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6320754717 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70173921806 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485849056604 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.5178549741 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289382063263 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828064076156 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899513786071 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175500980255 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806103770045 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.