Parents plays very crucial role in everyone's life.They are the one who motivate and give moral support tehn any otehr else. Therefor I feel that living with parents for longer time makes adults more happier as well as healthy.
To begin with, My first point is "Moral support". In modern days, everyone face stress in their life. For institance, when I was in india doing my graduation, I was living with my parents and one I recieved my master thesis grade that I am failed. I was shoked and ashamed on myself. I got in depression for longer time.And i thought to give up for the study. But thanks to my parents tehy stood against any odds. They uplifted me and put courage in me. I am so thankful that they were with in that bad time. After a few days back I got a letetr that there was mistake in computer system so recieved failed. I can not imagine a situation if my parents were not with time time I could have done many dangerous mistakes. Hence i personnaly belive that an adult doesnot have much experince to take right dicision. But Parents can help doing right things in right time. Because they ar ethe most caring persons in enybody's life.
Another reason , I would give the " lack of finance". It is very difficult to do job and study together and maintaning the cost. There are many students i know who struggle just to pay the house rent. For example, last months one of my friends borrow some money for the rent. He told me that its been a week, he didnt study because was doing job all for much longer time and then his work person didnt give salary in time noy is asked for money to many of his friend. Here , I just want to convey that If you have chance to live with parents and concentrate on study then do it.
I know one of friend who was living with other friends in apartment. He used to do job in night and wanted to study in days but in day time their roommates were causing so much noise he could not concentrate in study and rest as well. On the other hand me always get a quite and peaceful room for me. Where I acn get rest and study both. Hence I wopuld suggest everyone to living with parents are always beneficial.
Morever, If I will live alone ,I need not to cook food as well. My mom used to cook very delicous food and I enjoy it.
In conclusion, I strogly feel that a adult needs moral and financial support to for happy life and for the good study as well. Once you get job you can always make youself independent. While in study time living with your parents is the best dicision
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32985386221 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27147889207 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490605427975 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5479713978 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9032258065 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4516129032 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8064516129 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.5376344086 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241239025859 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605527755455 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490766861746 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132201296907 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045699824836 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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