The situation which I would choose is to get independence from my parents as soon as possible. We will discuss two reasons dn the following essay due to which I think this way.
Firstly, I live in a joint family. I have always wanted my own space. Moreover, I am a kind of family who keep things by himself and enjoy solitude. Also, unfortunately, at least for me, living in a joint family have also created personal family issues for me with others. For example, being a male taking fashion technology as a career of choice. Particularly for this, I can blame our family's narrow-mindedness. So, as soon as I get an opportunity to be independent, I will be more than happy to accept with two arms wide open. There can be similar cases for other youngsters too and to progress in life by living independently can be justified.
Secondly, I belong to a middle-class family. They have always taken care of me, have always fulfilled are my material expectations and for the most cases intangible ones too. But don't want to be dependent on them anymore. I have always burden been a burden on them due to which they have not been able to fulfill their wishes. I want to go a metro-city, earn chunks of money and fulfill my needs on my own. And as being a proud child, I want to help them financially and help them in fulfill their needs. I have lived in a rural area in my child and there are not many opportunities available that can help me achieve my financial goals. So, this is also a big reason I have always wanted to independent from my parents as soon as possible for mine and theirs's benefit.
But I also feel to live with them some more time because they have dedicated their lives for me. Any child in the world would like to help their parents in hard times as they grow old. So, if I think emotionally, they I would prefer to live with my parents. But we always need to think long term, So above reason justifies my argument.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the most cases intangible ones too. But dont want to be dependent on them anymore. I...
^^^^
Line 6, column 237, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'burdened'.
Suggestion: burdened
...ependent on them anymore. I have always burden been a burden on them due to which they...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42339832869 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65598557141 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518105849582 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7946484185 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1818181818 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3181818182 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205073794235 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648008512857 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489851009033 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141743473814 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329149873379 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the most cases intangible ones too. But dont want to be dependent on them anymore. I...
^^^^
Line 6, column 237, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'burdened'.
Suggestion: burdened
...ependent on them anymore. I have always burden been a burden on them due to which they...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42339832869 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65598557141 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518105849582 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7946484185 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1818181818 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3181818182 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205073794235 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648008512857 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489851009033 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141743473814 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329149873379 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.