technology
There is no doubt that technology has made our life much more convenient and scientists should be applauded for the various miraculous inventions. Therefore, I do support the fact that technology has been proved boon for people on earth because merits it provides outnumber the demerits associated with it.
First, the facility of transportation enabled covering thousands miles distance in just few hours. This has been accomplished by inventions of engines. The facilities of communication from one corner of world to another is possible due to advancement in telephone lines. And the most essential part of technology that is internet, has eased the working of various sectors.
Second, even our daily day to day activities are supported by science and technology devices. For instance, from microwave to diminutive mixer grinder, all gadgets involve a particular technique. And we must admit that our trivial work loads have been decreased to much lower extent now a days as with just one click, we can transfer hundred and thousands of money within few seconds or pay through different types of other payments like electricity bills, rents, and even mobile recharges.
Indeed, not only in business and industrial sector, but also the main reason for subsidizing mortality rates is inventions and advancement in medical sector. The development of various kind of antidotes, antibodies, injections and vaccines has really improvised the human health conditions, as compared to ancient world.
Furthermore, science and technology has also revolutionized education department. The various online teaching applications have connected students to the professors of their interested research area over all around the world.
It doesn’t just stops here even the agricultural sector is being benefited from science and technology. The green revolution has been successful due to advancement in machinery. Also the genetically modified crops and hybrids crops are gaining importance now a day.
Lastly, in a nutshell, I would conclude that advent of technology has assisted us in various fields from health to food. I do believe the that technology has some disadvantages but it can be overcomed by a wise use of technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, really, second, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44219653179 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03408334308 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615606936416 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6625147675 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.611111111 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275008035155 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941321915865 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129203353862 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142637057057 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136951600723 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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