television
We are living in an age in which television plays an absolutely pivotal role in one’s life as well as society. There are many movies with variety subjects. Personally I think if people see appropriate movies, they can learn very beneficial lesson from them. They can improve our behavior by teaching us loyalty, life style and help other people. The reasons can be analyzed as follows.
The first and important reason is that we need loyalty for life. In my opinion, society that doesn’t have allegiance among its people is a bad society. Televisions programs can show people that how they can loyalty to other people. For example my uncle has a sick wife. He often complained about this condition. After two months he saw the movies in television. In this movie a leal husband help his ill wife with much love. Thus he decides to treat better with his spouse. So we can see television learn loyalty.
Another important object that we learn from television is life style. The novel noteworthy investigation conducted by one the most reputable universities in my country has indicated, better life style can improve people’ behavior. For instance, we have one program in our national channel that exhibit many places for travel, good restaurants and amusement museums. According to that investigation if we have better life style we naturally demean better with others. Therefore I can say television programs have significant role in teaching lifestyle.
Last but not least, there are many people in every country that need help of other people. Some need money and some need kind. And we often see one movie about those people. By seeing these movies, we remember these people we know in realty and we will help them. So these movies aid people to behave more kindly.
As the aforementioned examples have illustrated, movies or television have good influence on people’ behavior. Society with more loyalty, better life style and much people that help other people can be resulted by suitable movies. Do you like to see such movies?
- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 76
- some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. other thinks that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... often complained about this condition. After two months he saw the movies in televis...
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Line 2, column 430, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...sband help his ill wife with much love. Thus he decides to treat better with his spo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...we naturally demean better with others. Therefore I can say television programs have sign...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ith more loyalty, better life style and much people that help other people can be re...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267175572519 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.150127226463 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0916030534351 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0356234096692 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0788804071247 0.0685040099705 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119592875318 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0254452926209 0.0351676179071 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65621509084 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0127226463104 0.0309702414327 41% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0559796437659 0.0887237588012 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0254452926209 0.0209618222197 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00763358778626 0.0139019557991 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2054.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 342.0 408.028673835 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00584795322 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347953216374 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263157894737 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175438596491 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119883040936 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65621509084 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523391812865 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 55.4515238303 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.6666666667 20.5533526081 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2652847554 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0740740741 120.699889404 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.5533526081 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 38.9824561404 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.55769230769 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113399675798 0.300154397459 38% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0869939901144 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0671755038611 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.399339074281 0.497263757937 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112557899616 0.151897553556 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466197280705 0.114077575197 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902666094891 0.0781384742642 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.261665340511 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0511517315849 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808496504641 0.210909579961 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043852790507 0.0618886996521 71% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 8.42114695341 214% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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