there is no reason why you should act impolite or rude explain your opinion?
This person is he Polite or impolite? Question heared a lot by people in most life situation. if i have been adked such a question, the answer of course will be "I agree". I believe most of people unless all of them are same as my opinion and i will explain my point of view in the following essay.
To begin with, almost all religions and societies teach us this a s one of life rule as many other rule like honesty, faithfulness, and etc...Politness is one of the most valuable role in life according to many nations and my country in particuler. On the other hand, impolite person will get himself in many trouble as he will make friends with the same ethics.take my own experience as an example of this, when i was teenager i use to not listen to my parents notification to be polite at home as well as in public i was keep answer my mom in a rude way and tell her to "shut her mouth"whenever ask me to do somthing that i didnt like to do it and my voice always louder than her. during one of school i answer the same way i use to answer her which give a negative impression on me in my teachers that moment is hard to be forgetten from all my school memebers and have a bad impact on my future as my teacher mention that in her report about my ethics.I felt its no reason to act in such ay.
In addition, control emotion even in difficult and hard situation should be owned as no need to be rude in these situation like ife difficulties, test day, and even if facing bad people.I belive we can change the others manner if we respect them and be polite.My father is a good example of this. My father is a lawyer and according to his job he facing many rude people and impolite because they have their own problems but my father alwayes listen to them and he never get mad because the bad words he may be heared from them, in opposite, he peak in a very polite respectful way andkeep control his emotion till those people understand that they are wrong by acting this way.
In sum, although some believe that if one become rude he can control the situation and his thoughts will be respected. I personaly feel that no reason to be impolite as it agreed by all religions and nation's ethics and control emotion is such a wise things to be done. I recommend that ethics should be value by nations and should keep learn our children these ethics.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 88
- you agree or disagree with the following statement? For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. Use 76
- scientific researches should be reveal or not. did you agree or disagree? 70
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were child 70
- Agree or disagree/tradition should be followed without taking care of individual prefernce 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, in addition, of course, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30425055928 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54768691694 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478747203579 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.607634377 48.9658058833 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.333333333 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.25 20.6045352989 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120503175725 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505384836765 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354691845712 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827909927173 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300598443749 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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