o you agree or disagree with the following statement?In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
job has an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate the efforts of the works because of its indelible impact om our society. Although some people hols the view point that complete the work within trivial time and in an incorrect ways have a better output. However, others hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception which led me to agree with the idea that finish the tasks correctly have a positive impact on both our and the company that we work for, even if we consume myriad time. In the following essay I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the mistakes affect our future and continuous feat. no need to mention, their are some mistakes hard to be correcting. Many company give their employee an advanced tasks and better salary if they are finish their works without mistakes. For instance, my brother make a simplemathmatic mistake when he was work for construction company. He finish the work and submitt to his superviso who never check the papers after. This cause the company to loss this project since the calculation cannot be recorrect after they already submitted to the government. this led to lose my brother job.
In addition, wrong and incomplete jobs may effect the company financially, also, it will reduce the confidence of their consumers in how this company will achieve their desire goals. Lets take X-finity as an example for that, their workers need to acomplish all their duty perfectly because on e mistakes may cost the company thousands of dollars. Furthermore, the consumers will loss their trust in this company and will never join any future plane that may do even if they provide better and cheaper offers than other competition company . Eventually, the reputition will also impress dramatically. Apparently, it must be taken into accounts that these companies should hiar a qualified and a well experienced workers which recommneded from other companies for their perfect and unmistakable tasks.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mentioned before, Takinfg all factors into consideration, I reinforce my idea that emplyee have to done with their jobe as much less mistakes as possible , nevertheless, they can consume time to finish it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06683804627 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72996069972 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583547557841 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0512073151 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.55 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114848739707 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364497953842 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03489501772 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733016342474 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416743087973 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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