IS there will be fewer car in 20 years, or not
Deciding wither there will be more cars or not, in couple years, is one of the modern's more difficult questions. One may opt for (A), which will be less cars, or B. Which one is more logically? In my opinion, there will be more cars in future. This is due to the power availability, freedom of choices, and psychological aspects.
First, fuel provides a steady flow of power for cars, buses, and more type of transportation. The concept of energy, is cornerstone of today's society. In fact, we need the power to sustain our life and without it, we couldn't survive in contemporary realities. and this power will not end, since scientists every day, discover new sources of energy. Take myself for example, in 1995, my grandfather passes away, because we didn't have car at that time, so I adopt that me or my relative will live without a car after this accident.
Another important factor to be consider, as the old saying goes "no risk, no fun", Although driving a car have more risks, but it has more fun, and freedom to choose the destination, rather than other type of transportation. As I remember, we went to a different state with my friends by bus, it was really boring, and we couldn't go to a specific area, because no bus goes over there. For further, people will look for more flexible ways to travels, which is more likely to be a car.
Lastly, from psychological aspects. driving a car contribute in building the personality. As for the society, preventing anyone from driving a car in any area, will cause many problems. This notion may cause depression, alienation and also ruin their self-confidence. As I read a research from Ajman University, they claim that the people who use other type of transportation rather than a car, will have less confidences about their choices.
This essay discussed how power, freedom of choice and psychological aspect, will decide which type of transportation will be in the future. which is more likely to be a car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Deciding wither there will be more cars ...
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...tions. One may opt for A, which will be less cars, or B. Which one is more logically...
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... In my opinion, there will be more cars in future. This is due to the power availability,...
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... to sustain our life and without it, we couldnt survive in contemporary realities. and ...
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...ldnt survive in contemporary realities. and this power will not end, since scientis...
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... my grandfather passes away, because we didnt have car at that time, so I adopt that ...
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...ds by bus, it was really boring, and we couldnt go to a specific area, because no bus g...
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... Lastly, from psychological aspects. driving a car contribute in building the person...
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...o ruin their self-confidence. As I read a research from Ajman University, they claim that ...
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...sportation rather than a car, will have less confidences about their choices. Thi...
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...f transportation will be in the future. which is more likely to be a car.
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f transportation will be in the future. which is more likely to be a car.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, may, really, so, as for, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79300291545 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85301063711 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545189504373 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2977669891 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247300164741 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902979303938 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893980990972 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166252131491 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623127385745 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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