Think of one environmental problem, then explain what you think would be an effective solution to this problem.
Following the development of technology and urbanization, the modern world has been facing a number of environmental problems. If I were to identify, I would focus on the overuse of fertilizers because it is now threatening the marine ecosystem. To begin with, the farmers need to utilize tons of chemical fertilizers to supply the commands since the fast growing global population. However, these chemical fertilizers which flow into the stream by the rain would promote the growth of algae, fast consuming the oxygen in the waterfield, and cause a shortage of oxygen to the fish. Therefore, lots of marine animals would die and eventually become extinct. In my opinion, I suggest that the government should invent natural fertilizers which won't damage the environment. Although the price of natural fertilizers might be a little higher, the government can encourage the farmers to use them by reducing taxes. Therefore, there will be more farmers willing to use natural fertilizers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, therefore, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 1977.66487455 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 407.700716846 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27388535032 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99173269559 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2136987546 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0660144342615 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290564202052 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0118053573976 0.0737576698707 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660144342615 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.