A time and a place in the past?
If I could go to the back at the time past, I would study the medical. So far I can tell, some of my classmates are going to study at the scratch. No doubt that every individual has his own personal opinion about choosing her or his careers and thinks about advantages and disadvantages of their aim.
Now let’s use the popular analyzing method named “SWOT Analysis”, which commonly used in the field of economics and management science in order to decision making. Here, S stands for “strengths”, W for “weakness”, o for “opportunities” and T for “target”. This method acts as a scale and measures weigh of weakness compare with advantages include strengths and opportunities.
Study medical offers many advantages such as job security. Our country, Iran, is experiencing international bans that have bankrupted factories and lowered monetary value. In short, during this time only medics had job security while by bankrupting factories many labors and engineers had fired.
5. Besides, the income is an outriding factor in my life. Medics in Iran earn money two thousand times more than an engineer. In other words, the money that a medic earn for a year is equivalent to two thousand years income of an engineer. These huge difference always tempted me to study from scratch.
6. Finally, in medical you will obtain more opportunities to medical support your family and friends. Furthermore, you will be able to provide more utilities for children and sending them to the non-profit schools.
Sometimes everything seems like a double-edged sword when speaking the strengths and weakness. In the medical field, there might be little chances for many people to stick out due to the bulk of talents, but compared with the strengths and the opportunities mentioned above, it can be ignored.
Nonetheless, when the target is overriding factor, I, as an engineer will be more likely to fulfill my target because of plenty privileges that I can obtain.
All that I have said above boils down to the conclusion that if I had the choice to go back the time I would choose the medical for its many benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...es many labors and engineers had fired. 5. Besides, the income is an outridin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, while, in short, no doubt, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09295774648 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3221336681 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611267605634 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9692811074 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1578947368 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0684942839093 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262875500653 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612279913735 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0329622295225 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373949295832 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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