In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
We are passing through an era that speed has the most significant and vital role in our life. In the past decades there were not an obligation to finish tasks as fast as now but, today it is very important to be fast. These all led to that, I agree with the statement which means it is vital to work quicky and being nimble and risk making mistakes instead of working slowly and being sure in every step that everything is correct. I am going to explain three potential reason to convince you.
First of all, time is the most valuable thing in this world that technology is now advanced and make everything convenient for us. According to the recent examination which have done among some special businesses which are service based, it has shown that most of the failures significant reason was not being fast in acting and just trying to be sure in every step. As a result, in most cases time is considered as an undeniable factor in surpassing others and being successful.
Secondly, in our advanced and competitive market which everyone tries to invent new things and ways, it is inevitable to not take some risks and actually you have to. For example, I was working in computer producing company and our computers were advanced in technology but our design was old fashioned. I suggested to our managers to redesign them but they did not take risk and next year our competitors produced new computers which was great in both aspect design and technology. At the end they got whole market and we lost lots of our clients.
Finally, people who are faster may make some mistakes, but they can learn from their mistakes and do better next time. On the other hand, those people who work slowly do not take any risks so they always remain at the same level as their job. I believe, making mistakes and learning from them can help us to do better in harder situations and similar circumstances. For example, Bill Gates the founder of Microsoft Company said, we should always take risks because even if we fail, we learn something new.
In conclusion, considering the above reasons, people who work quickly and take risks are more successful in today's world, while they are able to work in different conditions and adopt themselves to new situation and make decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69172932331 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48134224059 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546365914787 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6923548846 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277688497346 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800699684601 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101831614151 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163479991933 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102735622432 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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