In today's world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
To keep up with pace of the rapidly developing society, people need to keep exploring and adjusting their working patterns which enable them up to their jobs. Some people conventionally hold that we should work slowly and make correction the first place when working, whereas, I prefer to be favor of the opposite view which encourages people to work quickly and take risks even though it may bring up more mistakes.
Firstly, working quickly and taking risks enable people to explore more possibilities and catch opportunities which are important for people no matter what period they are at. As the society develops in a rapid pace, tons of new opportunities flush into the surrounding world. However, they are generated for those people who have been adapt to the modern world, working quikly and willing to take risks. A vivid example is the population of short video which makes phenomenal commercial opportunities in a night. Some people were brave to be the daredevil and made a considerable fortune by advertising when others haven't downloaded related apps in their phones, being left out of the bus of short videos. There are voice to condemn those short videos for spreading unhealthy contents. However, we can't ignore the opportunities and emerging occupations which enable more people to make a living by themselves on the short video platform rather than begging or thefting.
Secondly, making mistakes is normal for everyone which can't neutralize the benefit people will gain from working fast and risk, catching valuable but rare opportunities. A person hasn't the capability to make sure he won't make mistakes even though he has devoted all his energy and time to eliminate flaws because we are not machine running upon fixed programs. There is an opinions says that the most beautiful things of human works is the imperfect. I can't agree with it more. Actually, we are able to work better and better if we regard mistakes as our treasures rather than terrible things and keep learning from them.
Admittedly, working precisely is still a goal we should pursue when doing works. However, we are ought to be adapt to the rapid pace of living, getting opportunities we deserve, and then develop our own ways to improve the precision of our works.
To conclusion, I stick to the perception that it is more important to work quickly and be brave to take risks compared to the conventional pattern to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'adapted'.
Suggestion: adapted
...enerated for those people who have been adapt to the modern world, working quikly and...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...able fortune by advertising when others havent downloaded related apps in their phones...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...reading unhealthy contents. However, we cant ignore the opportunities and emerging o...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...g mistakes is normal for everyone which cant neutralize the benefit people will gain...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...luable but rare opportunities. A person hasnt the capability to make sure he wont mak...
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Message: Did you mean 'There are an opinions'?
Suggestion: There are an opinions
...ot machine running upon fixed programs. There is an opinions says that the most beautiful things of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ings of human works is the imperfect. I cant agree with it more. Actually, we are ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99757869249 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66912226422 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549636803874 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9438052206 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.411764706 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367096272055 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114269492841 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120983732852 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238225768854 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158146446191 0.0645574589148 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.