TOEFL essay Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone Others like to be with friends of the time Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends Use specific reasons to support your answer

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There are many different ways of spending the free time.Some people would rather be alone while other may prefer to spend their spare time with their friends. In my opinion, that would be nice if we spend some of our free time with friends, because we can learn many things from them, we can have fun and be far from stressful times, there would be some friends that can help me solve my problems.

To begin with, I can acknowledge new things from my friends. Every of them is professional in one profession. Each time we gather together, we are talking about new subject which happens in our caree...

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