Most people need to make some adjustment because all the things cannot follow their own wills in reality. In some situations, we have the right to choose what we want to do and what we do not want to involve in while in the most of times, we have no options. In my point of view, I agree with the statement that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing and I will consolidate my personal statement in the following assays
FIrst of all, focusing on trivial details are always required in order to achieve the terminal destination. Take my own biology experiments as a compelling example, I always spend a lot of time operating numerous procedure followed by protocol and even spend much more time analyzing the results. The process is often tedious and could be frustrating sometimes if you accidentally miss a step and ruin the whole experiments which make all the previous efforts in vain. However, I always all the hard-working is deserved whenever there is an exciting result.
Second, you must be equipped with multiple skills so that you could have the advantages to compete with others in society nowadays. Normally, people will have little interests in other fields that they do not be familiar with. However, they must learn knowledge and improve their ability. For instance, I major at biology and many people in my field start to learn engineering because many scientists start to use a computer to analyze and organize big data and make their working efficiency to the greatest extent. Even I have no interest in engineering, I still force myself to learn some basic information in order to compete with others.
Last but not least, many people will still need financial sources even they have not found the jobs that they are totally satisfied with or they sincerely love. They often find a temporary job that they do not enjoy. To illustrate, Cheryl, a friend of mine who is eager to become a singer, serving as a waitress in a coffee shop during the daytime while writing songs and practice singing at home or performing in clubs sometimes. Even though she does not enjoy the job at the coffee shop, she has no choice but give in to the reality.
In conclusion, life is not always a bed of roses and individual cannot always do the things he or she enjoys due to the fact that the process of being successful is always pain-taking, knowledge in other fields you do not like is sometimes indispensable and as a result of compromise to the financial consideration in reality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Most people need to make some adjustment...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the times') or simply say ''most times''.
Suggestion: most of the times; most times
... do not want to involve in while in the most of times, we have no options. In my point of vie...
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...onal statement in the following assays FIrst of all, focusing on trivial detail...
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...whenever there is an exciting result. Second, you must be equipped with multip...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to engineer'.
Suggestion: to engineer
... many people in my field start to learn engineering because many scientists start to use a ...
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...ation in order to compete with others. Last but not least, many people will sti...
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Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...heryl, a friend of mine who is eager to become a singer, serving as a waitress in a co...
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...o choice but give in to the reality. In conclusion, life is not always a bed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73348519362 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64801454874 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507972665148 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9258478715 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.875 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4375 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295749740457 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930419945435 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099561746366 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158720650672 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982041508435 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.