People are having many requirement to sustain on the earth. They have many thing to do whether people are interested in or not.I agree with the statement, people some time do things that they do not enjoy doing for three reason These may be based on the personal, social and financial reasons.
First, personal reason one of the important factor that force to do unwanted things. Some time you have to Sacrifice the freedom, valuable time, sleep etc. For instance,When grade or board exam about to come then parents force the student to get up early whether student are not willing to do. In addition to this, parents have sacrifice money, freedom etc for their children for the good parenting. student have to work hard in their study, rather than the spend time with friends or go out for the party. It teach us to use time wisely which make us how to control yourslf, responsible and successful in life.
Second, social is perspective is very important, some time you have manage your time to attend wedding, birthday parties and funerals to show concern we care about our fellow human beings. Participating social activities is selfless work but it help to improve person's personality, communication skills and make network.
Last but not least, Financially speaking people need to work long hour and some time they need to endure the boss's anger. these are the not easy and desirable to the worker, but they have to for the money and fulfil the needs of your and your's family. Sometime you have to agree with the boss or community decision which is against your like.
To put it in a nutshell, I firmly believe that doing things that we do not like is essential in our life. Not only does it help me learn more things, but also it is our duty and we should do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun requirement seems to be countable; consider using: 'many requirements'.
Suggestion: many requirements
People are having many requirement to sustain on the earth. They have many...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...ment to sustain on the earth. They have many thing to do whether people are interested in ...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...whether people are interested in or not.I agree with the statement, people some t...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , When
..., valuable time, sleep etc. For instance,When grade or board exam about to come then ...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Student
... their children for the good parenting. student have to work hard in their study, rathe...
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Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o work hard in their study, rather than the spend time with friends or go out for the par...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'teaches'?
Suggestion: teaches
...th friends or go out for the party. It teach us to use time wisely which make us how...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'managed'.
Suggestion: managed
...e is very important, some time you have manage your time to attend wedding, birthday p...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...cial activities is selfless work but it help to improve persons personality, communi...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kills and make network. Last but not least, Financially speaking people need ...
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...me they need to endure the bosss anger. these are the not easy and desirable to the w...
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Line 9, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty decision which is against your like. To put it in a nutshell, I firmly believ...
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Line 11, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t also it is our duty and we should do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70063694268 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3732846478 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3987198992 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286841162468 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908460332093 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105518742263 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167847228458 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120509314251 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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