TOPIC # 51 Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from?
Success is the direct result of careful planning along with hard work and perseverance. A persons who takes risks might reach some successes, but he might also lose them easily in face of unforeseen problems. However, those who make careful plan for every important goal or dream can achieve long-term successes. I personally believe it is rational to make an accurate plan for success.
First and foremost, planning outlines the advantages and disadvantages the objective. In the first step, planning makes it clear whether it is feasible, practical, and beneficial or not. For example, a student ...
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