TOPIC # 31 Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place?
The birthplace is not optional, but we can choose where to live, which highly determines the quality of our lives. I do not like the attitude that since this city is our hometown, we should stay here forever. I think one should investigate and explore new places to see how future outlook and living conditions are in other cities or countries, and experience new environments to compare different places. Who knows? He finally might find his hometown the best place to live, and appreciate it more. I personally believe that I should seek other cities for the following reasons;
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- TOPIC # 41 Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? 93
- TOPIC # 31 Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place 63
- TOPIC# 26 It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? 60
- TOPIC # 36 Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives. (Automobiles, bicycles, airplanes) 87
- TOPIC# 30 It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose? Why? 85
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