This topic has been offered at least 2 times in the past 10 months: Your friend has the opportunity to study in either one of two majors (fields of study). Which one of the following two types of majors do you think is a better choice and why?
a) A major that would allow your friend to complete his or her studies and get a degree faster (so that your friend can start working full-time soon).
b) A major that would require more years of study but is likely to lead to more and better employment opportunities and job offers in the future.
From the two proposed options, I would recommend the second one that is about the major which is longer, but at the end, it would have a better future and job opportunity. Although spending less time on studying a major has its own advantages like entering the career world sooner, a better job situation worth spending much time, since 2 or 3 years are not very long in comparison with 30 or 40 years of working, and the availability of job positions is necessary when a person is choosing a major.
First, I believe that opting for a major which is longer to fulfill the requirements of graduation but has a more promising future, is a more logical choice, since at last 2 or 3 years of studying more is worthwhile in comparison to 30 or 40 years of working a person in the future. When a person has to decide in a dilemma, he or she should evaluate all different factors; two of which are the costs and benefits of a specific decision. For example, a person is going to be a doctor. He or she cannot work until 7 years of studies should be passed. However, after these 7 years, he or she could have a job which is much more brilliant than an ordinary job whose major lasts only 4 years. Although he or she cannot make money in these years, the extra money that he or she will earn because of a better job will compensate after just 2 or 3 years of working.
Secondly, what will happen after graduation of a major and there is no spectacular position for that job? It would be a disaster, even if a person has finished his or her studies after 4 years and have time for pursuing a career; this extra time would not help. Therefore, any individual should seek a major whose job opportunities may not decrease in the future. Not only does not decrease but also may increase. A person who has done his or her studies after 6 or 7 years, but can find a suitable job has many opportunities. When an individual can be pretty sure that after some years his or her career path is still brilliant, 1 or 2 years of more studying not only is not an obstacle but also could be seen as an opportunity for having a better future.
In conclusion, I would recommend to my friend to make a decision based on the long-term situation. If he or she can choose a major whose future job opportunity is excellent, I would rather propose this major, even if he or she cannot make money for some years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35267857143 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58217832265 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430803571429 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2372684043 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.875 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191595670318 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687789737938 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509419029734 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137304655056 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493119726371 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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