No doubt that sports and social activities are very important aspects in students' life. some people believe that sports and social activities should receive equal financial support as classes and libraries, others disagree. In my point of view, I think sports and social activities should receive equal financial support for two reasons.
First, doing exercise is so healthy for students. by playing sports, We build our body and become in good fitness and our mind would function properly so we will be able to focus more on study. For example I read an article last week about the benefits of exercise. It stated that if students engage in exercise on daily basis they will decrease their chances of developing diabetes and hypertension. It also mentioned that exercise will improve their memory and concentration by 60%. So, I believe that sports will help students become more successful. As we can see, sports deserve to be financially supported by university.
Another reason is that sports relieve stress. for example, I remember when I was in university, There was a fitness center. Anytime i had a hard day I would go to the center and play many sports there. As a result, I was able to forget all about my problems and feel much better. This experience taught me that sports and social activity are so important in university.
In sum, though some people my believe that sports and social activities are not as important as classes, sports should receive equal funding as classes. Because not only will the sports improve students' health but also it will relieve their stress. For these reasons every university should invest more money on sports and social activities.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'no doubt', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263665594855 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.147909967846 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08038585209 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0514469453376 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0739549839228 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128617363344 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0128617363344 0.0351676179071 37% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.55940922883 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0128617363344 0.0309702414327 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.048231511254 0.0887237588012 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0418006430868 0.0209618222197 199% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0032154340836 0.0139019557991 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1692.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 281.0 408.028673835 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02135231317 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.419928825623 0.338922669872 124% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277580071174 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160142348754 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0925266903915 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55940922883 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 55.0661362787 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6111111111 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3428963355 48.84282405 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 43.3691182285 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.48235294118 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350831951016 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0994262805657 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103452274929 0.0752933317313 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475945403796 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141797515366 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131550096696 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126754428294 0.0781384742642 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.233468667784 0.336927656856 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0293026361079 0.067059652881 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271395253504 0.210909579961 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124805704776 0.0618886996521 202% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.