In this century that universities play an important role in each society, many researchers focus on the lifestyle of student life at the university. Many researchers believe that universities should spend some of their budgets to the sport, social activities and other activities of the student as well as scientific activities. Because the students are not robots; hence, they have physical and mental needs that the universities should respond to them. I agree with this opinion, I will elaborate my view on the following reasons.
First and foremost, the students should have a healthy mind and body. If students exercise and do sports, they will be more energetic and healthful. Hence, their outcomes will improve and they will not attract dangerous hobbies like smoking. For instance, in my bachelor university, many students do not have any healthful hobbies in the break times; hence, most of them gathered together on the corner of the campus and started to smoke.
Secondly, social activities improve the skills of team working. One of the requirement to have a successful society is that the people have suitable social behaviors and the skill of team working. If the students have enough social activities in the universities, they will learn how to behave in a group and will help each other. Consequently, their competition with other students will be in a constructive way.
Finally, the students can use the sport and other facilities on the campus, hence, they can save their money for scientific purposes. If it does not exist any facilities for sport on the campus, hence, some of the students will go off campus gyms or other centers that are very expensive for most of the students. Most of the students will not be able to participate in such activities, hence, they will ignore those activities. Therefore, this occurrence will have a bad effect on them.
To sum up, in my view, the universities should spend some money on the sports and social activities of the students on the campus. Because the results of this work will be more valuable than the spent money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99426934097 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71870702485 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469914040115 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5825818235 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10855413046 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450757047682 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440130945581 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776560856502 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544817247911 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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