Development is a continuous process in the life of a human being. therefore man, especially at younger age does one or the other activity for both physical and mental progress. Moreover, schools and colleges are the platforms to nurture students for their flourishment. However, limited funds of these schools and colleges are usually provided for academics rather than sports. I agree with the writer's claim that the sports and social activities should be given equal importance with the academics providing them the financial support. Following essay describes you the reasons for holding my opinion.
Firstly, sports and social activities provide a sort of relaxation to the students, from the routine academic schedule and future help them to concentrate more on their academics. However, now-a-days universities and colleges concentrate only on academics to improve the fame of institution, subsequently ignoring the sports and social activities. As a result the stress level in students are increasing leading to depression, quitting studies etc.,
Secondly, children are more prone to health issues like obesity, and juvenile diabetes etc., due to the sedentary life style habits. Moreover, parents even concentrate only on the academic performance of their kids and doesn't really encourage them in sports or extra curricular activities. Whereas, sports make students fit and healthy. in addition to this social activities helps students to develop in multiple fields besides refreshment. For example, encouraging social activities like dancing, drawing may person to develop them them as his/her career besides entertainment.
Next, sports and social activities helps in the personal development of students, especially to improve the self confidence,concentration, time managment skills, and over come the weaknesses like stage fear, introvert behavior etc.,
Finally, sports and social activities make students multitalented which aids them in their successful careers. Further, sports helps students to get financial aids for academics too. Hence,i agree with the writer's statement that sports and social activities should be encourage by the universities and colleges by providing them the equal financial support and importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85196374622 4.8611393121 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05545177415 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2444231912 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0625 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203502689005 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741250723866 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912559137054 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122783046525 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713987234624 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 10.9000537634 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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