With the last 5 years , many students attended universities in the world seeking for studying and getting skills that could help them in thier future careers. Universities' systems are different from one another .However, all of universities have the same standard of teaching ,and at university students confront to many kind of materials that demand hard - working and mind - thinking . However, activities and sports are not on the list of student courses . For may point of view, sports and activities are not important and must be rejected at universities for many reasons .
The aim of studying at university is to help student to improve thier ability to understand many topics related to many sections such as Science , Engineering, Teacher and so on rather than doing physical activities . University is a place where you get experience in your life and gain useful information .
Sports and physical activities are just a waste of time and money .Time is very valuable notebly at unversities and will not be companseated .I mean , you have only one chance in your life and if u do not get benefits , do not wait for another . People spend most of thier time studying at universties doing hard-working they did not even find times for enough sleeping do not to mention thier times in the labratory , and Money should be kept for students .For example, they should equip thier labratory with high modern tools , which are very expensive and need alot of many. Instead for buying tools for palying or doing exercies.
Implementing Sports and physical activities will plummet students' activities of studying and prose hazard to thier life . Sports can lure students from thier studying and make them wander and think about who is going to win next week and students might be partial with sports because it is a kind of playing and who does not hate playing . In addition , tough activities and sports are dangerous . For example ,footaball is a sport that people may hurt when they are playing and spend weeks at hospital with broken leg or fracture rib etc. As a student , getting away from sports and activities is one of the most important tips to ensure safty and your mind is focusing on studying .
Inspite of all the above , some people could say that student have to play sports and do activities because as we know that unversities are very stressful and students become tired .I agree up to a point , but if those people know for how many times sports can take from thier life of studying and the money they spend not to mention the risk and by telling them other tips that could help student to dicher stress such as spending time talking to each other will make them very comfortable.
To sum up, unviersites are places to evolve students' thinking by teaching them varieties of materails and subject them to thier visually filed the so-called labratory to immplement wht they studied .By contrast, adding physical activities to thier courses will not be useful for them it is just a waste of times , money and make them absent-minded in halls . The more you focus on your studying activities , the more chance for getting good job .
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'i mean', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248695652174 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.189565217391 0.158761421928 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0973913043478 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0469565217391 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.04 0.0685040099705 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118260869565 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0486956521739 0.0351676179071 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57782238724 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330434782609 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00347826086957 0.00188951952338 184% => OK
Determiners: 0.0452173913043 0.0887237588012 51% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0260869565217 0.0209618222197 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015652173913 0.0139019557991 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3246.0 2387.08602151 136% => OK
No of words: 561.0 408.028673835 137% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78609625668 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297682709447 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229946524064 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160427807487 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0873440285205 0.112833075102 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57782238724 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427807486631 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.2851692474 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5533526081 161% => OK
Sentence length SD: 116.80000948 48.84282405 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.941176471 120.699889404 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.5533526081 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 58.0 5.54480286738 1046% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.9946524064 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.50314465409 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32071364069 0.300154397459 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145424991142 0.103427244359 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0879516910973 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.612092498092 0.497263757937 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19266361385 0.151897553556 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158898127664 0.114077575197 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065743617046 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.324018868119 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0775226200473 0.067059652881 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211870549498 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718513797353 0.0618886996521 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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