I agree the Universities and colleges should to receive equal financial support sports as classes. Even though the classes are important in all cases, the sports represent importance in the student life. Sports activities not only are distraction, even a way professionalization, develop of talent and healthy life to improve habits as a way to prevention problems in the future.
Firstly, some students really have sport talent. The colleges must to offer scholarships to develop the student talent. Sport is a special ability that not all the people have. There is a lot kind of intelligent according some pedagogics theories. Sports require of a specific intelligence. Students could be achieve big goals if they are dedicated with they full enjoy. Become athletes is not only a hobby, it could be a profession.
Secondly, students, who are dedicated to sports some times, represent the nation in Olympics games. In this way they can provide important recognition to the country winning medals. The profits of a sport playing is high as another scholar disciplines, even though some time the salary is better than a doctor salary. In several cases athletes receive millionaires contracts by a specific brand to be the brand image.
Finally, nowadays practicing sports is an important activity. One of the most common problems of health is the obesity. For example: In several countries as México and EUA, obesity is a problem of public health, is cheaper the prevention than the treatment for the government. For that reasons, the colleges and universities need to improve the financial support to this kind of activities. The young people in the colleges could achieve news habits than an old person in this way is a good decision to the universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... really have sport talent. The colleges must to offer scholarships to develop the stude...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'specific intelligence'.
Suggestion: specific intelligence
... pedagogics theories. Sports require of a specific intelligence. Students could be achieve big goals if...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'kind of', 'in all cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.33125 0.229887763892 144% => OK
Verbs: 0.1125 0.158761421928 71% => OK
Adjectives: 0.06875 0.0866891130778 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.040625 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.015625 0.0685040099705 23% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.103125 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.01875 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94929983763 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034375 0.0309702414327 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.146875 0.0887237588012 166% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01875 0.0209618222197 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.003125 0.0139019557991 22% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1765.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 287.0 408.028673835 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14982578397 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.432055749129 0.338922669872 127% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.327526132404 0.251872472559 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202090592334 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128919860627 0.112833075102 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94929983763 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 52.6538955752 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1052631579 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5288183581 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8947368421 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 47.8578763983 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.68518518519 1.45489161554 185% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222031322589 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0991600866461 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0932213476429 0.0752933317313 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47475469645 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153344991646 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879273412521 0.114077575197 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112101999902 0.0781384742642 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314180469418 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0796618507647 0.067059652881 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161528593526 0.210909579961 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101067612776 0.0618886996521 163% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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