Engaging some form of regular physical activity leads to improvement in health and general well being,on being said that physical exercises both aerobic or anaerobic requires great deal of vigor and active participation. I am of the opinion that engaging in some form of sports activity is equally imperative and it also goes a long way in maintaing health in an eclectic way.This essay will discuss my stance towards providing greater emphasis on co-curricular activities.
Contrary to the belief that excelling in a specific subject area of study is of a greater importance than emrolling in some form of sports activity or social events, evidence shows that engaging in regular physical activity and participating in social workshops helps in improving motivation, providing them with some sort of recreation, increasing their attention spans, enhancing concentration and building up overall characteristics.Some administrators believe that university is a symbol of learning and teaching. So, the money should not be spent on trivial activities which is not related to education. On the other hand, some others think that even sports and social activities are related to education and can determine future success. As it is said that body and mind are strongly interconnected,it would only be wise to believe that both are dependent on one another as the saying goes sound mind equals a sound Body. Furthermore a large number of Psychologist also have confirmed that depressed patients do not participate in any form of social activity or recreartion beacause of low energy levels, poor motivation and a great deal of inertia.
Secondly engaging in any sport activity allow one to channelize their unpleasant emotions through a process known as emotional catharsis, as it can release the residual anxiety and stress. Catharsis essentially refers to a release or discharge or cleansing of emotions, generally with the purpose of relieving the stress that develops from holding these emotions within the individual, in adiition research also suggests that movement
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 73
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40557275542 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08851112621 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.506838865 48.9658058833 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.0 100.406767564 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8888888889 20.6045352989 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134912329074 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533542549587 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302468605878 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807412701369 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470879435535 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 11.7677419355 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.01818996416 130% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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