There are different views on honesty is the most significant factor in human's communication. Some people think that be above-board can destroy all kind of connection, while others point to that be straightforward is the best way to keep nexus. As far as I concerned, fall out with someone who you love is commonly based on cheating.
In the first place, sometimes keep nothing back can protect someone who has connection with you. For instance, If your friend's mouth smells like rotten egg, you have to warn him to wash his mouth. Because If he doesn't know about his downside, people will backbite and his dignity will drop as soon as possible.
In the second place, trust build strong relationship between two people because people tend to believe someone who is trustworthy. To give a clear example, my friends always trying to teach me their harsh words, but this is not the thing that they are hate me. If they never tell me about my lack of fashion sense, I couldn't find my favorite clothing type or if they didn't mention that I was becoming too nerd, I would never trying to feel happiness from dance, music and travelling.
Finally, telling the truth creates freedom and lightness, on the other hand, holding back the veracity will add more heavy baggage on your shoulder. To put it simply, no matter how you hide the truth from someone who deserve to know realness will be revealed one day. It is easy to one lie becomes thousand. Therefore, telling the truth in a right time will simplify problems.
In a nutshell, be honest is the one of the most important thing, when we communicate with others. It can defend somebody from negative rumors, creates secure relation and gives liberty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73986486486 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51118525922 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0092672453 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112846556101 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370503692454 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286395554789 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582910899702 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168892408443 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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