Some says that if someone have told always truth, you should trust he/she which is also the most signaficant in any relation between human. I completely agree with this statament. There is numorous reason why I agree but I will explain several reason by the following centence.
To begin with, if someone tells a lie, it makes people lack of confidence against she/he. There is a famouos story which is called lying shepherd. When I was a little child, my mother have been reading that story. İn which, there was a shepherd who grazed the villagers' sheep. One day, he felt very bored and decided to play a game. He began to yield up "help, help there is a wolf". the villager trusted him and suddenly they came for helping. Yet, there was no wolf and everything was normal. They got angry and returned their home. The shephers recurrented those games several time and it ended up same. However, one day really a wolf attected the herd, no villagers came to save the shepherd. Eventually, the wolf took whole herd. Reliance is too much important in the relationship.
Secondly, telling truth provides the peace and tranquility in the society. İf, people are happy in the society, in where everything goes perfectly that people could get more money, become healtier and education level gets higher. As soon as there are trustaable people around, people could go from their home with easy. Neighbourhood could increase and children could have fun with their friend.
Thirdly, telling a lie never give up from who says it, with which people could face one day. One could tell a lie to save that time. However, one day it can find unexpectedly which could be destroyed.
İn conclusion, I agree with the statement idea that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people is the best way, lack of confidence, providing the peace and tranquility, and facing one day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
Some says that if someone have told always truth, you should trust he/...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'villagers'' or 'villager's'?
Suggestion: villagers'; villager's
...ch, there was a shepherd who grazed the villagers sheep. One day, he felt very bored and ...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...'help, help there is a wolf'. the villager trusted him and suddenly they ...
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Line 2, column 582, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...e. The shephers recurrented those games several time and it ended up same. However, one day ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87155963303 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56757652179 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4213049346 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.375 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45833333333 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158420473592 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419767683823 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064184051274 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120571802723 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101953436157 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.