At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. There are numerous reasons why I agree with this statement wholeheartedly, and ı would only explore a few of the most important ones.
İn the first place, if people have done sports and social activities, they could gain an ability to establish a solid relatinship people who are around them. For instance, in daily life people argue about so much issues which could be policy, sport, religion, family or about one serie, etc altough they don't be same side always. When they support their own idea, sometimes they could speak each other with high voice which causes so much problem. However, social people aware of how to make soft this situation, who can touch peoples heart.
Another reason why I advocate at universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial supportis that they can recieve responsibilities easier than the others who are not busy any sport or any social activities. İt shoul remember that the people who gain this ability, get numerous advantages to be succesfull. They can have so much friends easily after that they can get jobs faster. Succesfull gets succesfull. if one has self-confidence , he/she can be able to do everything.
Last but not least, people who take part in different activities should be sensitive to social events. they understand what is mad what is well or what is useful what is not benefit. For example, two cars have crashed and there are so much injuries. teh person who awere of what he/she dould do suddenly call an ambulance and begin to help people.
To sum up, ı agree with those people who believe that At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02160493827 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6520756636 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8942564945 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6875 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285555838313 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108907383934 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177221249195 0.0737576698707 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243046534461 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190005846108 0.0645574589148 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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