I agree with the opinion that life is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children is true, even İ want to live that time because of relationship. There are several reasons to support this idea which I will figure out following sentences.
To begin with, today tecnology is advenced which gets people handle with their problems easier. For example, electonic divises supply unnumerable facilities. For instance, not only our grandparents past but also our near past there was no washing mashine at home especially in the village that people should make their dress clean with hand. There was just one phone which everybody uses and it was extremly hard for people to comnunicate eact other. However, at this moment even every children have mobile phone to contack. I can not imagine there is no washing dishes at home.
Secondly, internet is the best invent last century which provides increadible possibilities. Today, internet makes distance really closer that you could speak our family even they are so far from you. So many people do shopping internet which gets more time people to do the other jobs. What is happening world we can learn easily owing to television and internet.
Third but not least, transformation is great at the moment which makes distances so close. For example my hometown is west part of Turkey, however, my work places is southeast part of in Turkey which is 22 hours far from each other with bus. Whereas, it is just 2 hours with plane that is more comfortable and it gains me really time. However, when my grandparents were children, there was even no vehicle to go city center. They had to get up so early to go shopping and walk hours.
To sum up, I concur wiith the opinion of those who believe that Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. And I believe that passing time, life would be easier and comfortable than today
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rable facilities. For instance, not only our grandparents past but also our near ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, whereas, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79402985075 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53058986253 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558208955224 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1534215289 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5263157895 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253904996496 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767252415573 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087452503519 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168843615603 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103145487197 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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