As far as the sources are concerned, both the passage and the lecture discuss that the Chevalier de Seingalt compose a memoir about his life and adventures. Unlike the listening passage, the reading passage claims that there are some doubts for this memoir that it does not indicate what happened in real.
Firstly, the reading passage says that Chevalier was rich when he was living in Switzerland and he spent enormous money for parties and gambling. But, he borrowed money from a Swiss merchant and it shows that he was not rich as much as he told. The listening passage, however, says that he sold something and he was waiting for that money. While he was expecting that money he borrowed money.
Secondly, in constrast to the speaker's point of view, the author points out that there is doubt between Chevalier and Voltaire's conversations since it was written after they met and it is not possible to recognise everything. The professor reject this idea. She says that he wrote down as he recalled.
Thirdly, the author states that there is problem also how he escaped from a prison in Venice, İtaly. İn the memoir he debate that he escaped in prison by utilizing a piece of metal to make a hole and climbing the roof. For the critics it sounds enjoyable but, they claim that the Chevalier had a political friend and they helped him. The speaker, however, disagrees with this point of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... gambling. But, he borrowed money from a Swiss merchant and it shows that he was ...
^^
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd it shows that he was not rich as much as he told. The listening passage, howev...
^^
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hing and he was waiting for that money. While he was expecting that money he borrowed...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'rejects'.
Suggestion: rejects
... to recognise everything. The professor reject this idea. She says that he wrote down ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'debates'.
Suggestion: debates
...ison in Venice, İtaly. İn the memoir he debate that he escaped in prison by utilizing ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 244.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79508196721 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41911617852 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.158837973 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447721424773 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152273576218 0.0996497079465 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075537369003 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255369040214 0.162205337803 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498650227574 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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