To be a better human being, we should know the virtues of life. We have to learn to be truth to self and to a person whom we value the most. We have to discern the essence of every relationship in our lives. Every coin has its two sides but it is up to us what to choose. However, I agree with the statement to some extent that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. There are divergent benefits of telling truth to grow a healthy relationship and nurture it with much love, security, truthfulness and patience. Telling lies can create joy and harmony for a moment but in long run, it is like a slow poison which undermines any relationship.
First, it is judicious to be forthright. We should never fear of expressing our true feelings. Feelings can be good or bad, and sharing it in a right way to the person is crucial in any relationship. To have a happy and prosperous life, truth is the best element. Hiding things and lying to the loved one will neither help anyone grow in any relationship nor it can be taken as an ideal foundation for setting up any relationship. Therefore, we have to meditate for what is substantial for lives, speaking out truth for abiding relationship or telling lies just to have a short-lived peace of mind.
Second, telling truth helps us to have more improved self esteem and audacious in any relationship. There will not be any fear of exposure of truth by some other mean. There will not be fear of losing the loved one. We will not be compelled to live a sequestered life as the consequences of telling lies in every walk. It is in ourselves how we treat our lives. Peaceful true life or glimpses of transitory joy because of lie, the choice is in our hand.
Third, it is said that to get something precious in life, we have to sacrifice something. So, if telling truth hurts in present, it will not continue to hunt us in future. We can always have a fresh start. For an instance, if you are planning to go abroad for further studies and you have not told anything to your loved one, it is going to hurt them bad, knowing that you did not share the thing to them. This can result to the end of the relationship because there is no point of trusting each other as you are too much occupied in yourself and you have no room for telling truth. But if the situation is reversed, where you share your plans with your close one, it will help you move forward without any doubt. This will obviously build up a strong bond in the relationship.
Hence, truth and lie, both are part of our everyday life. Any inconsequential lie which can bring smile in our near one happy does not harm any relationship. Instead, it helps to boost-up the relationship. Smile and laughter can alleviate any kind of pain. In the same way, telling truth in any relationship is like watering a plant which will grow healthy and strong. Telling truth is the foundation of happy lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2424.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48888888889 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63386200871 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6267397245 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228647051696 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665919080495 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805675886292 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147130989108 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621434870859 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.