In my personal opinion, I strongly agree with the idea that to keep my old friends, because they always encourage me to pursue my goals, and become patient about stressful sitution in various steps of my life. I take this views on account of the following reason.
First of all, we have been known each other, we had gone in the same highschool, compete with each for getting high score in the classes. Also, we were studying together in exam periods, and then accept in university.
Second factor to take into account is that I have had a lot of memory with my close friends. we spends several days on road trips, and took pictures in aesthetic high lands during summer time before starting first year of the univeristy.
Third reason is that, they have helped me when I broke my ankle in first semester, and I could not attend to university`s lecture classes, my best friends, thought me the missing lesson and gives me the lecture notes. Thats why, I have passed my exams with their aids.
Last but not leasts, they provide a strong incentive to continue my goals. Hence, I would not imagine my life without them. One must emphasize that having friends is a crucial`s rule in anyone life which assist us to have enjoyable life.
- TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 66
- TPO-10 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you 60
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-14 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
In my personal opinion, I strongly agree with the idea that to...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... a lot of memory with my close friends. we spends several days on road trips, and ...
^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...lot of memory with my close friends. we spends several days on road trips, and took pi...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...pictures in aesthetic high lands during summer time before starting first year of the unive...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... lesson and gives me the lecture notes. Thats why, I have passed my exams with their ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, third, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69545454545 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47871517638 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4222305702 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0773719095072 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304674726256 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292835069023 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435707227385 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030933519033 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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