Friendship is important in everyone life it plays a key role in the person's life. We all meet various people in different stages of our lives, such as schools, colleges and in the workplace. Few individuals are very close to our heart and they becoming friends. some people believe holding the old friendship is the significance and the others think to keep on adding new friends are important. I believe that maintaining the old friendship should be more important compared to the making new friends because of understanding and experience.
First and foremost, the understanding between the people is very important to create the strong relationship between them. Similarly, friendship also needs a realizing. If the friend is old enough he knows every incident, likes, and dislikes as a result we are more comfortable with them. For example, I would like to share my personal experience. When I was in third grade, I have met a person named Alex and his attitude is similar to me. Initially, we both are just classmates. Later we start sharing our likes and dislikes we became good friends and still every week we meet. I believe, its all because of comfort between me and my friend.
Second, in addition to comfort, we all gain a lot of experience. Although it's an old friendship, they also have a lot of new experiences to share. we all know no two people having the same skills and knowledge. Few are experts in one skill and others might not in that. Similarly, between friends, they would be skilled persons with different accomplishments. So, they have an easier to share their knowledge. for instance, recently my mobile phone was repaired, I don't know how to repair. But, my friend is an expert in mobile hardware and he repaired and also thought me to repair the phone and that's really a new experience.
I sum, old friendship always important to keep because they are more comfortable and to gain experience compare to the new friend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...veryone life it plays a key role in the persons life. We all meet various people in dif...
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Suggestion: Some
...to our heart and they becoming friends. some people believe holding the old friendsh...
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... them. Similarly, friendship also needs a realizing. If the friend is old enough he knows e...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nd still every week we meet. I believe, its all because of comfort between me and m...
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...ecently my mobile phone was repaired, I dont know how to repair. But, my friend is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, similarly, so, still, third, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82985074627 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81381881037 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519402985075 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6165363679 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5454545455 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2272727273 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124289490405 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379788713318 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511829246423 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102473399601 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500895848695 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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