Mankind is a social animal and cannot live alone. In the lives of each one of us, there were some people that we have spent most of our time with them. For instance, family members, friends, teachers, colleagues, classmates, and others are the people that are important in our lives. Among them, friends are more important than others because we can choose them at each age. Many people think that they should find the new friend at each age and they do not mind keeping old friends. However, other people prefer to keep their old friends instead of finding new ones. In my view, keeping old friends is more important than starting a friendship with a new friend. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
First and foremost, old friends know each other's habits and behaviors very well. They can predict their friend's response in different situations and will not be disturbed with them. They can easily identify their common points like choosing the hobbies and places for going on vacation because they know each other very well. For instance, my old friend and I always can make the pleasure time with each other because we know each other very well. On the other hand, new friends do not know each other correctly and they may make mistakes and may do something that disturbs their new friends. Hence, keeping old friends is more important than finding new ones.
Second, old friends are precious because they were with us in most of life's steps. The old friends know the life story of each other and have lived with them. Hence, they can perceive each other's feeling better than new friends. For instance, I and my best old friend have studied together for the master exam and have lived with each other's difficult situations. Hence, can perceive each other's feels very well and can give useful advice and help each other in other situations. Therefore, in think keeping old friends are essential.
Finally, old friends are someone who matched each other. If some friends have a lot of counterpoints in the believes and lifestyle, they will not continue their friendship. Hence, they will not become the old friends of each other. Hence, in my opinion, old friend are real friends because they have passed their exam in the friendship. On the other hand, the new friends are people that you know them very well and it is possible that you finish you friendship soon. Hence, I think we should spend our energy and time with the old friend rather than finding new ones because the old friendships will be more stable than new ones.
To sum up, in my perspective keeping the old friend is more important than finding new ones. Because we know each other very well, know my life story and have lived with me and finally, they have proved that they are real friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...ends have a lot of counterpoints in the believes and lifestyle, they will not continue t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, you know, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72073921971 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19493068161 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.367556468172 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.278374873 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1071428571 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3928571429 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 11.8709677419 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212855380568 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948230382354 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709466240542 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162871522708 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355470163025 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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