The celebrities and famous people are important and impressive people in each society. Both youngers and elders may be influenced by celebrities. Personally, I think that the youth and teenagers are more influenced by famous people than elders. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
My first and foremost reason is that from an educational standpoint young people and teenagers are searching for the ways of living and making their future. Hence, start to search for champions and heroes to follow their lives. Most of the youth would like to be a famous person in the future. Therefore, they study and search the manners of life of famous people and try to know more about their opinions and personal lives. For instance, when my cousin was a teenager, he would like to be a footballer, hence he always has studied the lifestyle of famous footballers.
Furthermore, youth usually watch the live games or exciting movies to release their energy. Young people are full of energy and want to release it in different ways. One of the healthy ways of releasing this energy is watching games or exciting movies, in this way, youth become interested in the athletes and celebrities. Hence, their opinions and lifestyle are important for youth. On the other hand, elders prefer to have a calm lifestyle for the rest of their lives. For instance, when my grandfather was a young man, he loved watching the football game, but, now he does not like it at all.
Admittedly, youth are attracting to the famous persons. The young people love some celebrities because they are famous, rich and some of them are good looking and attractive. Hence, they would like to know more about their personal lives and opinions. For example, one of my friends loved a celebrity of our country and she extracted all the details of his personal life and opinions. Hence, I think the opinions of celebrities are more impressive for young people than elders.
To sum up, famous artists, pop singers and athletes are able to influence people especially the young one. Because young people are searching for the best lifestyle, are full of energy, love the famous people and would like to be a famous person in the future. This influence maybe can be good or bad, but it is clear that youngers should not be blamed for this influence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86432160804 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56031506893 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442211055276 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3224493888 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1739130435 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3043478261 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149128604157 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566423907493 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445329648078 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108118617149 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594246436326 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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