TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Is evident that make friend is important for all people. Thus, I don’t agree completly with statement that is more important to keep your old friends than it is make new friends. Therefore, I have three reasons to explain my opinios.
First, since we are children make friend is good, is important and necessary for children. When we we are children, our friends is like brothes, help us and spend long time with us. For exemple, when I was child, I had a friend that didn’t have a brother, and always that he was in my house he said that I and my brothers were his brother. The time passed and when we were moved for other city, we cried because we were live far, and he told me that we were very important for him, since day he moved near my house.
Second, make new friend is necessary, because we never have our friends together with us. All people pass for much periods in life, like high school, college, job and others. And all this is necessary make friends in all fases of the life. For instanse, when I started the college I make a big friend, his name is Leonardo, we help us each other and it was a good time that I passed with him. When I finished my course and I moved, I needed to say bey for him. I and he cried and stayed very sad, since whe didn’t know when we were find again.
Third, authough I don’t be a pscologist, I often read in newspaper things about it, because I guess interesting. In the intervew that I read, the pscologist said that is essential make friends in all steps of the life, because much friends help and make company for us. The pscologist inlustrate this situation saying about that people who does’t have friends are more probability be depressive, and entals others ills. I though this very incrible and truth because when we are with our friends, always we are enjoing the life.
In conclusion, I belive deeply that is important we mantain our old friends. However, is necessary make new friends, since they are not with us in all time. Beside that, make good friends is good and decrease the chance of you had a illness. So that, I necessary make a balance between the twoo point of view in this argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is good, is important and necessary for children. When we we are children, our f...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: we
...rtant and necessary for children. When we we are children, our friends is like broth...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have our friends together with us. All people pass for much periods in life, li...
^^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...together with us. All people pass for much periods in life, like high school, coll...
^^^^
Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...since whe didn't know when we were find again. Third, authough I don't ...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...iends in all steps of the life, because much friends help and make company for us. T...
^^^^
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...side that, make good friends is good and decrease the chance of you had a illness...
^^
Line 9, column 233, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ood and decrease the chance of you had a illness. So that, I necessary make a ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, i guess, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.475 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42090375686 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4475 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3322411369 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2380952381 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0476190476 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207210933424 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823142028069 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992333785168 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164958231593 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117287176325 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.