Who can question the fact that nowadays cars have a significant role in the private transportation of the people? If we just visit a car exhibition, that is enough to figure out how people are looking to replace their cars by new ones. However, there has been much debate about the future of cars. Someone might agree on the opinion which says the car usage will decline vastly in a twenty-year period. However, I believe not only there are not fewer cars in the next twenty years, but also their usage is growing rapidly because of population growth, increasing people's passion to buy more new cars, and variety of new eco cars.
Although the acceleration of population growth is declined in some countries, it is still a positive acceleration which means the population is growing almost all around the world. New families will be formed with basic requirements such as transportation. Public transportation system might not be able to handle such a great society member even in developed countries. For example, in China, there are always several daily complaints against transportation systems which are not capable to carry such a huge number of people. Now imagine what will happen twenty years later when the population might be twice the current.
A recent social study showed that there is a strong passion among young to buy new modern cars which are convenient and can support their need such as driving relax. Thanks to new technologies we can hear about new cars in which you can sleep as a driver and the car will be navigated automatically. For instance, Apple corporation is designing a car which is fully digital and you never need to worry about an accident. there are complicated systems in this car which can avoid any mistakes during automatic navigation. On the other hand, new advertising methods will reinforce the youth beliefs that they really need this new car. So in the near future, it is not strange if we see too many cars which are driving automatically.
Mayhap some people avoid using cars anymore just because of the environmental problems like air pollution. Yet, new eco cars are designed which are environmentally friendly, not too expensive and just work by electricity. As a case in point, Toyota has several eco cars option to buy like hybrid cars which use both fossil fuel and electricity as an energy source or electric cars which use energy directly by electricity. Most of these eco cars are not expensive and everyone can afford one of them. As a result, that part of the society who are concerned about environmental issues probably will be convinced to use the cars.
To make a long story short, although there are some disapprovals against the idea which says in the future there will be fewer cars in streets; I, personally, believe the car usage is growing fast because the population is growing fast too, the youth has an appeal to buy new modern cars, and new environmentally friendly cars are emerging which can help the air pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... never need to worry about an accident. there are complicated systems in this car whi...
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Line 9, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rging which can help the air pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2494.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88062622309 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73084386317 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493150684932 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 794.7 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2226479197 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.363636364 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2272727273 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15448570786 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053958629173 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385904367627 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951309209844 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117645545921 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.