Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As far back as the 1600s, car industries have been in tremendous improvements. These industries have created various benefits to individuals and the economy as a whole. If some people could imagine that there will be fewer cars in twenty years to come because of its great hazards to the environment, I definitely take the opposite view. The following paragraphs expounds on my reasons.
To begin with, it is extremely difficult for most car companies to fizzle out of the market. Car companies such as Tesla, Mercedes, Hyundai, Toyota and many more contribute greatly to the economy. Most of these companies generate substantial revenue to the government which in turn makes them highly indispensable to the government. Furthermore, new technologies in the car industry is at a fast pace with sophisticated models of vehicles being produced every year. These new technologies are developed by skilled mechanical and electrical engineers, software gurus and many other intellectual people. Accordingly, manufacturing of these cars creates a job employment for these individuals which will be inconsiderate to come to a stop as it is a means of survival.
In addition, the unreliable means of public transportation. In some third world countries, public bus transportation is a mess. It is mainly a one-man business and it is highly inefficient as people would not depend on it to commute them to their various destinations. This is due to the incompetence’s of the private owners in poor maintenance of vehicles and time management. Consequently, people will definitely prefer to use their private vehicles to commute to their various destinations with ease and having less hassle with public transport. Also, in developed countries, considering the inclement weather that occurs in most of year, most people will subscribe to stay at the comfort of their vehicles without having to hop from one bus to the other during the cold winter period. In general, it is probably difficult for fewer cars to exist in years to come as many people have various reasons towards having a car.
The last but the least, in some parts of the world, people perceive having a car as a form of luxury and will ultimately keep up with the new trends in the car industry.
In conclusion, it is incontrovertible to think that that with the aforementioned reasons, there will be fewer cars in twenty years to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'expound'.
Suggestion: expound
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th the new trends in the car industry. In conclusion, it is incontrovertible to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...lusion, it is incontrovertible to think that that with the aforementioned reasons, there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, third, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11655011655 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0937837118 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51048951049 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8762217472 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7727272727 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328814030688 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10298279162 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133993776742 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240845536168 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.264848365391 0.0645574589148 410% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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