There are always two motive of performing an action whether you are doing for personal enjoyment or you should do. In today's scenario who is bothering for the other? People know the value of life and way to make life beautiful and adventurous. Agreeing to the point that people spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like in compare to doing things they should do. Who knows about the future? Who can predict that what will happen in next moment? It is always better to live your life in your way. Who wants to die without doing anything personally? Mentality of the people have been changed and tradition of spending time on personal enjoyment is in progress.
The term "personal enjoyment" has various meanings and comprises all sort of attributes performed by a person for the enjoyment in the life. A common example is love life means talking about the couples. The tradition of live in relationship has been increased and increasing day by day because love birds want to spend time with each other for personal enjoyment irrespective of what others are thinking about them. In the old times, we used to save money and made property for the children but now spending life in a luxurious way. They are not keeping tension and worry about the future. Have you heard about any adventurous activities people used to perform in past? Those people also wanted to enjoy but the reason is they were preoccupied with other things instead of personal. They knew very well that what they should do. Nowadays every young wants to perform adventurous activity for the sake of personal satisfaction.
People should understand the value of money and time. We are living in a society where you can't do everything on your own wish. People need to understand the depth of the word "should". In ancient history, Lord Rama had left Sita for the sake of common people. He suppressed his liking and knew what he should do for the benefit of his reign. Too much spending time on personal things will lead to problems in the future.
People should maintain the time for the personal enjoyment and things they should do. They should not cross the limit which will create trouble in the future and also they should not wait for the time to spend on personal enjoyment. Time never waits for anything. People should spend time on personal enjoyment keeping some restrictions in the mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'motives'?
Suggestion: motives
There are always two motive of performing an action whether you are...
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Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a luxurious way" with adverb for "luxurious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... for the children but now spending life in a luxurious way. They are not keeping tension and worry...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e. We are living in a society where you cant do everything on your own wish. People ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'sort of', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239035087719 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.188596491228 0.158761421928 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0745614035088 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.030701754386 0.046263068375 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0526315789474 0.0685040099705 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127192982456 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0482456140351 0.0351676179071 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5659223719 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285087719298 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0855263157895 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0328947368421 0.0209618222197 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0219298245614 0.0139019557991 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2404.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 414.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80676328502 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321256038647 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214975845411 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157004830918 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0966183574879 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5659223719 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473429951691 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.5145507728 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 14.7857142857 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6539025915 48.84282405 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 120.699889404 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.644075263715 39% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 36.2832988268 45.7405998639 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.52419354839 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364297234179 0.300154397459 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0742507391009 0.103427244359 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0842146145506 0.0752933317313 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.433754585255 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156085718042 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130058795135 0.114077575197 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114501869081 0.0781384742642 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.481818797945 0.336927656856 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0371377807702 0.067059652881 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28848589608 0.210909579961 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544638091106 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.